Time had
past, but still I felt sorry. We had something incredible, it couldn’t be
described with words… and suddenly everything was wrong. The smiles were broken
and meaningless; your caresses stopped meaning “I love you” but “I meant you no
harm”; your arms, once warm and gripping, which invited me to a sweet and
eternal love moment, felt rude and elusive.
I breathed
deeply, holding the air for a second before expelling it.
I
remembered again and again all those moments… Once they were my beginning and my
end, but now they were emotionless; my tears had suffered so much that they
couldn’t afford even a minute thinking of you.
The minutes
passed as my mind was getting lost into senseless thoughts about past times,
and finally the hour arrived. I breathed deeply once more to get prepared and I
left home, accompanied only with my words and emotions.
Then I saw
you.
My breathe
abandoned me, my words got lost, my emotions crawled for another chance…
Even the
time seemed to stop.
A last
sentence was formed in mind: “Nothing stays forever”. Those words hurted my heart
so deeply that all my emotions flew away from me, and left me as empty as a
hole, and as the wind blew my hair, it took away my memories.
I raised my
head, appealing my strength, and I cleared the tears that fought to spread from
my eyes to say my final words to you.
– You owe me nothing, as I owe you nothing.
Let's just say "goodbye" and continue separated ways.
Pues como siempre, me encanta todo lo que escribes. Siempre me deja enganchada a seguir leyéndolo y admirada por lo bien que lo haces.
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