17 abr 2012

"Goodbye"


Time had past, but still I felt sorry. We had something incredible, it couldn’t be described with words… and suddenly everything was wrong. The smiles were broken and meaningless; your caresses stopped meaning “I love you” but “I meant you no harm”; your arms, once warm and gripping, which invited me to a sweet and eternal love moment, felt rude and elusive.

I breathed deeply, holding the air for a second before expelling it.

I remembered again and again all those moments… Once they were my beginning and my end, but now they were emotionless; my tears had suffered so much that they couldn’t afford even a minute thinking of you.

The minutes passed as my mind was getting lost into senseless thoughts about past times, and finally the hour arrived. I breathed deeply once more to get prepared and I left home, accompanied only with my words and emotions.

Then I saw you.

My breathe abandoned me, my words got lost, my emotions crawled for another chance…

Even the time seemed to stop.

A last sentence was formed in mind: “Nothing stays forever”. Those words hurted my heart so deeply that all my emotions flew away from me, and left me as empty as a hole, and as the wind blew my hair, it took away my memories.

I raised my head, appealing my strength, and I cleared the tears that fought to spread from my eyes to say my final words to you.

 – You owe me nothing, as I owe you nothing. Let's just say "goodbye" and continue separated ways.

1 comentario:

  1. Pues como siempre, me encanta todo lo que escribes. Siempre me deja enganchada a seguir leyéndolo y admirada por lo bien que lo haces.
    Y el resto del texto, está perfectamente a la altura de la última frase.

    Consigues hacer que el lector se meta en la piel del personaje, y eso no es fácil.

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